This helps students write with a specific audience in mind.
- Now other student's are considering sharing their writing.
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| Ewa |
I shared my baby brother story to the sixth graders. And they laughed when I said, "Owwww!" The sixth grade teacher said to her sixth grade students', "They should do better than what their doing because IF the third graders can do it. Then, they could do more than that." And Ms. Scudero said, "It was a real good story!" And it felt real great!
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| Jay |
(See Jay's story with tons of editing)
I shared my Paper Bag Princess ending with the 6th grade class. I was shy at first. And then I wasn't shy. I showed my work to the class. I displayed my editing, which means adding more words and using a different colored pen. I felt excellent because I was sharing my work with another class. ~ Jay
I shared my Paper Bag Princess ending with the 6th grade class. I was shy at first. And then I wasn't shy. I showed my work to the class. I displayed my editing, which means adding more words and using a different colored pen. I felt excellent because I was sharing my work with another class. ~ Jay
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| Fieda |
I shared my different ending of the Paper Bag Princess to 6th grade students. I was nervous at first. Then I wasn't nervous but I got used to it. I read my whole ending of the Paper Bag Princess. I pretty much liked sharing my story. Next time maybe I'm gonna make a story at home. And maybe share my story with my teacher. But I have to find my stapler first. ~ Frieda
Hello 3rd Graders! My name is Angie Taggart and I am the musher that your teacher is having you follow. I really liked reading your blog! It looks like you have a lot of fun at school.
ReplyDeleteToday we are unable to run the dog team due to icy rain. It is very slick outside! Please make sure to keep in contact and have a blast at school!
Mushing down the trail, Angie